I'll Kill you with this Spoon

If you ever come at me again with that knife

I’ll kill you with this spoon

I wouldn’t start making plans

Because I’m sure that day will come soon

 

You cut me with that

I’ll surely pop your eye out

So let’s just not try it

Because I don’t want to see you sit and pout

 

You even touch me once

I’m going to shove this down your throat

So baby lets not go there

Because I’m not ready to get my coat

 

If you ever come at me again with that knife

I’ll kill you with this spoon

So I wouldn’t start making plans

Because I’m sure that day will come soon

 

 

Author's Note

This one makes me a laugh a little. The thought of killing someone with a spoon is quite ridiculous.

Reviews

[Jen]

I really liked the repetition of my favourite stanza in this particular poem

"If you ever come at me again with that knife

I’ll kill you with this spoon

So I wouldn’t start making plans

Because I’m sure that day will come soon"


& the fact that I know exactly what it's about makes it all the more enjoyable :)
All in all, very powerful & emotional piece. Props to you McTwitch :) :P

[LadyRouge]

Interesting. It made me smile as well. I like that you ended it with the same stanza you began it with. This poem is very creative in my eye. Good job!!!

[Jocelyn Elizabeth]

I enjoyed this. It made me smile. In just a few stanzas, you manage to create a character with personality and spunk. Nice thumbnail also.

Jocelyn

[Night Personified]

well well that was quite interesting and amusing to read... i love the kind of serious tone to it but the spoon just makes it all that better hahaha :) ♥ i want you to be the first person to read my first writings put on here :)!!!!!!!

[I Feel It All]

Unique and well written.
I wouldn't have thought of it.

[Moii]

It has a lot of meaning to it, but at the same time its really fun, I'm going to put it in my library so others can read it.

[Cornbred]

I like this has a lot of character to it.

[KieraCrimeScene]

haha, this is one of my favorite pieces I've found on here this is going in my library!

[Adeline]

I really like this! It's like morbid humor I guess, cause you're talking about something evil and criminal but it's funny at the same time. Good job on this one.

[Butterflymom]

This was very fun, and creative.

[LSS]

Enjoyed the lightness of this poem, I'm sure you're perfectly capable, but just think what you could do with a melon-baller?
Lar