Where you gunna go? [where you gunna go?]

Pink pen

Blue pen

Where you gunna go when

 

You  

  Crash

 

when you crash down low

where the river doesnt flow

where you gunna go

 

when.

     You.

         Fall.

 

when you fall when you really fall

when you really loose it all

when you can no longer stand tall.

 

Where

     You

       Gunna

        .GO.

 

do you know?

will you ever know?

tell me when you know?

will you smile .before.

                             .you.

                             .go?

  

Author's Note

Hmmm...

Reviews

[.]

I really really like this poem.
Actually, I like a lot of your writing.

[I Feel It All]

this is really neat.

[Geoffers]

too much punchuation lullx