Crazy Love

A Poem by Sabrina Ann Bliss

Night falls helplessly,

as we lay under sheets of white satin.

Emerald eyes gaze into mine,

It’s like being struck

by a runaway train.

If this is insanity

I’ll stay here forever.

Forever and ever,

crazy in love with you.

© 2012 Sabrina Ann Bliss

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emmajoy

Brief but utterly meaningful! 'Night falls helplessly, as we lay under sheets of white satin. ' those words alone create a sultry atmosphere, and the remainder of your poem is a glorious shadow following in their wake. Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sabrina Ann Bliss

Thanks everybody!

Posted 12 Years Ago

MOON	Good write , flows easily and heartfelt. Posted 12 Years Ago Good write , flows easily and heartfelt. Rating /100

khalid

very nicely written. it has so much love and passion. it shows crazy love and sharing. i like the rhyme so much. great work

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 2, 2012
Last Updated on May 2, 2012
Tags: love

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Sabrina Ann Bliss

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I have been writing poetry, short stories, lyrics, and have even dabbled in script writing since...forever! I just love it! It's a well-known fact that writing for a living is tough, so I currently.. more..