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Wrote this after an....encounter.

Recovered until a moment's glance,

my mind races with your image.

A child-like fantasy revealed,

left broken-hearted again.

... Sometimes I wonder if everything is a sin: a thought, a feeling, a dream of him.

I'll stay hidden,

under the asylum of my umbrella.

While it will not cease the pain,

at least I'm out of the rain.

Author's Note

What would be a good title?

Reviews

[Gandré]

this is sweet, too and easy to read. thank you for reading my poem.
short poems are easy to memorize >)

[I'm Just me:)]

beautiful i really love this

[MOON]

Beautiful , love the line under the asylum of the umbrella.

[emmajoy]

This has more than the words, it's between thoughts and feelings and a wondering how and why. Title: 'Out of sight, not out of mind'?

Welcome!

[khalid]

it is very simple, very short in size, but it really reflects sooo many emotions of love and passion. i loved all the images you have drown here as well as the nice word picking. it is really so nice. thank you