silent battles

working progress

sound pierces the silence of night

light cast upon still grass

battles rage

yet go unknown

broken

shattered

can't be fixed

heartache

dark lines

over pale white

split in two

the suns fingertips

still touch the earth

new days break

and the moons phases turn

time passes

pain subsides

second tick by 

life in confusion

switching tracks

to get to a different station

picking up people along the way

and dropping others off

continuous cycles

Reviews

[Michelle Lea]

This was really good (-: my favorite part is
"sound pierces the silence of night
light cast upon still grass
battles rage
yet go unknown
broken
shattered
can't be fixed"
the yet go unkown I can relate and so much is said in just these few words!

[A Spectacular Case]

Your layout is well thought out, i love the idea of the poem, it's very well constructed.

[Gandré]

Let me tell you this was a nice reflection...always searching, never ending, a provocative relationship between you and the world conducted in the beautiful setting of the most interesting topics: gaining inner strength.