Love

Love

A Poem by Ethan Brill
"

This is about my dream girl... I'm still waiting

"

Ooo wee
Oohh woh
Tank has me feeling
Like I should never lose my glow
Cause I know one day you'll see
All the love that's waiting for you inside of me

I could never
Be better than you
A clue
A differentiated view
I'm different and it's true
When I say you're the sun shining bright
The one clearing up this oh so cloudy sight

I love love
And I love you
Two things that matter
The only ones that help me climb the ladder to heaven
My souls constant incline
That's the energy you give me
Lost when you aren't with me
I keep walking up toward
The precipice of kissing you

22
Yet I still view
Your lips like a key to heaven
I don't need your sex
I just need seven things

One kiss every morning
To wake me up feeling appreciated

Two eyes looking right into mine
Like this is a divine connection
And I'm the one who made it

Three emotions
Empathy, respect, humility
Cause your humbleness
Can slowly kill my foolish negative prideful emotions

4
Your body, your heart, your soul, and of course your smile

5
Your style and the way you do things
Be cute
Make my heart swing

6 pick up the pieces of my heart
Put them back as bricks made to last like the pyramids
Look into my lids
Beneath them where all emotion lives
Read me
Cause god do I love to give

Seven
Believe in my heaven on earth
We only have one life, one birth
All I want to do
Is spend the rest of it with you

This is all I want
From all of me
To all of you

© 2015 Ethan Brill


Author's Note

Ethan Brill
Love still exists guys and gals

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This is truly amazing.
Its so beautiful, and touching, filled with so much emotion.
I really enjoyed reading this.
You wrote this with your heart, and that makes for the best of poems.
This is such a romantic piece.
You sound like such a lovely guy, be patient, theirs someone out there for everyone.
I hope when you do find her she appreciates you, and deserves you.
If I hadn't already found my MR right, Id waist no time, swooping you up.
You are a beautiful person.
GREAT POEM!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

This is truly amazing.
Its so beautiful, and touching, filled with so much emotion.
I really enjoyed reading this.
You wrote this with your heart, and that makes for the best of poems.
This is such a romantic piece.
You sound like such a lovely guy, be patient, theirs someone out there for everyone.
I hope when you do find her she appreciates you, and deserves you.
If I hadn't already found my MR right, Id waist no time, swooping you up.
You are a beautiful person.
GREAT POEM!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really loved reading this, it was great :) I dig the number system thing ya got going on

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a really good poem. I just went through a breakup recently and I am glad that you found the heart to write this poem. It was really good. Thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 21, 2015
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Tags: love, emotion, beauty, energy, connection

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Ethan Brill
Ethan Brill

Louisville, KY



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