Getting Up Late!!

Getting up late

Getting up late

Can be a very bad thing

You can miss the bus

And be late to school

Getting up late

Is really bad thing

You could be late to work

Or miss a meeting 

Being late is a bad thing

 

Getting up late

You could miss

A meeting, school, or a big achievement

Parties, parties of all kind

Birthdays or just for fun

If you get up late

Life will pass you by

And you didn't even notice

Until it’s gone.

 

Author's Note

this was one of my free write journals so if it doesn't looked finished i'm sorry i ran out of time and didn't bother to go back and add to it... but i think it ends pretty well.... tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Casey Emeigh]

I like this poem! I like how the main theme was repeated throughout the poem! It ends on a very deep note! =D

[Bethany_Savy]

i really like it! I like how at the end of it, you made it inspirational adding in life will pass you by. Good job