Surrender

Surrender

A Poem by Erudite
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Wrote this impromptu, in like 5 minutes, as a challenge

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I shine
Like a forest fire at night.
There are murderers who'd like to extinguish me
There are demons who'd like to redirect me

I am myself.
Like a child at play.
There are soulless creatures who wish I'd live vicariously
There are the faceless, who wish I'd conform to them.

I turn away from evil.
I fight against my temptations.
Though I lust, hate, envy, and desire it all.
Minute to minute I choose to love instead.

With the great beast looming above us,
You think your pride is your strength.
But it is your worst enemy.
Let it go
come be, along with me
Gentle, loving, at peace.

Give yourself to a life of unconditional surrender.
It may feel like losing, but 
It's truly the most efficient means of fighting back. 

© 2018 Erudite


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Added on March 27, 2018
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Erudite
Erudite

Riverside, CA



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Greetings, reader. Please do enjoy this music I've prepared for you, and don't be too bashful to take a peek at some of my writings. My poem titled "Ah, To Float in My Boat" is one of my personal .. more..

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