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Finally,

I am over you.

 

I wake up in a good mood.

I have a smile on my face.

I can say to myself,

“I am over you”.

In sunlight hours everything is easy.

While I walk, 

As I learn, 

As I live,

You seem a like such a distant thought,

And sometimes not a thought at all.

Every day seems so easy without you,

But then night falls-

 

Then you say to me,

“Can I sleep with you tonight?”,

And how can I resist?

Your blue eyes,

Your strong arms,

Holding me

(to what I said,

"I do not love you, I do not want you"). 

We fall asleep,

Warm, Safe,

Happy.

 

I wake up in a bad mood.

You are gone again.

I can say to myself,

“I am over you”,

But I would be lying.

 

 

Author's Note

This is brand spanking new. NO edits AT all. Any and all critiques and criticisms are welcomed warmly. Suggestions will all be thought of with much weight. PLEASE HELP.
-Alice

Reviews

[Amy Vaughn]

DON'T EDIT. I love it. Sometimes the best poems are when you just write and something beautiful appears without fussing over it. I love the way it ends.

Also, favorite lines: "You seem a like such a distant thought,
And sometimes not a thought at all."