Forever

short poem about my views on forever and the problems it creates.

Forever;

Impossible to achieve,
I wanted desperately to believe,
But to do so was only naive,
I hated watching you turn to leave,
And now your loss is mine to grieve,
Forever...

Reviews

[Bear]

Nice rhyme and meter, and to cover such a broad topic as FOREVER in so few words and express yourself so masterfully is a show of your writing talents. Thank you for posting and allowing us the pleasure of reading your work.