Broken Parts

Poem about self discovery, love, and separation.

Broken promises and broken hearts.

How can we fix the broken parts?

Our love is awkward,

the truth confused,

we're beaten down and so abused.

To start to heal,

we must forgive,

and trust ourselves,

and learn to live.

I'm here for you,

and you for me,

but in the end,

it's I,

not we.

We'll search our souls to find our power,

lest we get lost this witching hour.

Once we've discovered who we are,

we'll find we've fixed the broken parts.

Author's Note

I wasn't entirely sure how to break this up so I'm not sure it flows right this way, but I tried!

Reviews

[Kunda]

It flows alright! I like how its so connected - start to finish - this is actually something I can relate to very well

[fiery-san]

This is a simple yet beautifully written poem which I found tells a story... so short yet complete... I love it. ^_^

[Kajal Gulabani]

Hi Hannah, its really nice. Good job Gal !!!

[RachelReaper]

actually, this was kind of uplifting. I like this a lot, great write!

[The Invisible Girl]

I love this! Very well-written and I think the words flowed beautifully together to show the emotion. Great job! keep it up! :D 100/100