This is certainly a powerful and inspiring piece. It's very difficult to write in a rhymed form (probably why I don't often try it myself, LOL) and not have the product end up coming out forced, but you've managed to write this piece with a nice, even flow and the word choice was quite good. Overall, I would say this was quite well done.
This is certainly a powerful and inspiring piece. It's very difficult to write in a rhymed form (probably why I don't often try it myself, LOL) and not have the product end up coming out forced, but you've managed to write this piece with a nice, even flow and the word choice was quite good. Overall, I would say this was quite well done.
I have a tendency to write mostly "free verse", I have written some lyrics and they will appear on the site gradually.
I don't like being defined by style anyway, I just try to convey a message or at .. more..
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