In Limbo

In Limbo

A Poem by S. A. Venus

So much in common
With a foetus buried
Deep within the womb
Life in darkness
Love concealed within
The depths of a soul
Yet to be set free

Dreams of what may await me
Locked away inside
A curious mind
Feelings of uncertainty
About a future
Not yet written
Still, however, seeming pre-determined

Love, Life, Hope and Prosperity
All laying in limbo
Waiting for my acceptance
To be drawn into
My own destiny.

© 2008 S. A. Venus


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"Dreams of what may await me
Locked away inside
A curious mind"

Those lines are so haunting and the poem is beautifully sad
I love it

Lynda

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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S. A. Venus
S. A. Venus

Maitland, Australia



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I have a tendency to write mostly "free verse", I have written some lyrics and they will appear on the site gradually. I don't like being defined by style anyway, I just try to convey a message or at .. more..

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