Concerns I Don't Speak of

Can we leave the past in the past

Can you leave the last where it's at

Can we forget about what we did

Can we think about what's ahead

Can we disregard the distractions

Can we stay focused instead

Let's remember the good times

But keep making them while we're at it

Be selfish for me

Only give me your time

But don't do too much

Cause I still need my peace of mind

Don't scold me

Don't be too brash

Don't be a pushover

But don't make me too mad

And I know I haven't been perfect

But is this too much to ask?

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Very well penned. This is what I call "sweeping issues under the rug". Unfortunately the only thing that happens is resentment on one side or the other will build up and an explosion will result.. or one will just be so frustrated that he/she leaves. It may be easier to just look the other way, but sometimes getting all the issues out can be better. You've done a great job of relating all the issues you don't wish to discuss and sweep them away.

[Erica Ross]

Thank you so much :) This is exactly what I was going for in this piece.

[Baby Ricochet]

I liked the haphazard rhyming. Nice job young lady

[Erica Ross]

Thank you so much :)