Gut Feeling

Gut Feeling

A Poem by Erica Ross

There are some things that do not sit well with me
There are some things I am suspicious about
Because every time that we are all together, something doesn't feel right
Maybe I am just being paranoid and possessive
But this feeling, I just can't avoid, and I'm beginning to become aggressive
I put too much time in, just to get nothing out
I put my pride away, when that is really what I am all about
I'd hate for this to blow up in my face, because I don't know how I would quite react
Cause I'm as sweet as they come, yet, can be as evil as they get
I am a winner
I am a keeper
Since I am the best, it would be in your best interest to please me
And to my comrades, do not deceit me
For I am the hand that feeds you, what good would it be if you bit me?
Hopefully, this is all a mind thing
And if it is, mind shut up
I hate mind screams
I just can't shake...this gut feeling

© 2012 Erica Ross


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Erica Ross
I just had to vent a little bit.

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love this, true too, follow the gut.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always follow your "gut feeling". It will never lead you wrong because it's your soul's highest truth. Listen. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem, we've all had those gut feelings

my favorite lines are:

Cause I'm as sweet as they come, yet, can be as evil as they get

and

Since I am the best, it would be in your best interest to please me

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Erica Ross

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Sirius King

12 Years Ago

no prob :-)

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Added on September 28, 2012
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Erica Ross
Erica Ross

memphis, TN



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