The Happiness Suspended

Depressing and somewhat true poem. Enjoy!

We met and we fell
And I could just tell
That I'd try, and I'd try to make you happy.
You said you were lonely
I called you my one and my only
And I tried, and I tried to make you happy.
Next two months were the best
And unlike the rest
I did, I really did make you happy.
Then you took a blue pill
Your intent was to kill
And I cried, oh I cried, and made you happy.
You wanted a ticket
Family Christmas, you'd miss it
But I bought it, and I made you happy.
Worse led to worse
My name you did curse
And I failed, miserably, to make you happy
Our relationship ended
My happiness suspended
But I still tried, and I tried, to make you happy.
You got with another
Knows you better than mother
Envy won, but I tried to make you happy.
Next week was depression
Bad news in rapid succession
And I still attempted to make you happy.
One thing made me flip
Around the school it just slipped
And your man, he made you really happy.
Now with a gun to my head
You wish I was dead
I'm gonna try, and I will finally, make you happy.

Reviews

[TheBatman]

If this isn't the most beautiful thing I've ever seen I don't know what is?

[JayParamo]

Is it really? Good god, thanks! It's well appreciated!

[Will]

Man, that is a great piece. The darkness you felt is definitely apparent, and I can tell you put alot into this one.