C-a-r-e

C-a-r-e

A Poem by Ae Pen

she tried
hard not to


miss him


but she
failed, so she
sent him a


message


only to
find out that
he doesn't


care.

© 2013 Ae Pen


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Hi. So, here is my review... think this is a powerful poem... It is uhmmm. Well, I have awaken kinda....wipe the sleep from my eyes powerful.... and this person you speak of or these people... do they care or not... or is he just p-i-s-s-s-e-d.

I don't know. I will have to read it a second round. But had I read it earlier, yup before the mornig in which now I review it....This is uhmmm.... one of those nightmarish poems.... uhmmm why you asked, cuz maybe for some reason I slept easy last night....

And yup, we are new friends on WC. but uhmmmm.... If you need to "Talk" let me know.

Wow, still trying to get your message.... I might have to ask for your help. Cuz you sound hmmm puzzling.


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 15, 2013
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Tags: poetry, her, him, care, not

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