C-a-r-e
A Poem by Ae Pen
she tried hard not to
miss him
but she failed, so she sent him a
message
only to find out that he doesn't
care.
© 2013 Ae Pen
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Hi. So, here is my review... think this is a powerful poem... It is uhmmm. Well, I have awaken kinda....wipe the sleep from my eyes powerful.... and this person you speak of or these people... do they care or not... or is he just p-i-s-s-s-e-d.
I don't know. I will have to read it a second round. But had I read it earlier, yup before the mornig in which now I review it....This is uhmmm.... one of those nightmarish poems.... uhmmm why you asked, cuz maybe for some reason I slept easy last night....
And yup, we are new friends on WC. but uhmmmm.... If you need to "Talk" let me know.
Wow, still trying to get your message.... I might have to ask for your help. Cuz you sound hmmm puzzling.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on January 15, 2013
Last Updated on January 15, 2013
Tags: poetry, her, him, care, not
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