I Was Running in the Desert

I was running in the desert,

Hiding from the sun,

Looking for the person

I knew would be the one.

 

But the sun was relentless,

It scorched my broken heart.

I knew I must keep running,

Or else I'd fall apart.

 

There was an ocean there,

Within a wooden bowl,

He sat apon its waters,

He stared into my soul.

 

He bundled up a storm,

Blew accross my face.

Searching for an answer,

While trying to erase. 

 

Author's Note

I might finish it later. i couldn't really come up with a way to end it right now... XD

Reviews

[SunShine Meadows]

i really like this!! its so good! plus i'm jealous that you can ryhme haha.

[BeckyBoodles]

I really like it. Fantastic symbolism.
A break between the fourth and fifth lines would make it a bit better.

[RiNNA<3]

so far, i like it(: it rhymes well, and the way you use so little words to describe it is awesome(: good job. looking forward to the ending