Blue Heart

Blue Heart

A Poem by Erin Locke
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I had a talk the other day, a much needed talk, with my heart. It didn't go very well, at least I did not go the way I thought it would.

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I had a talk the other day with my heart, 
I told it "you really have to stop being so sad all the time." 
It said nothing, but everything 
My heart gave me a look of grief, it was sad to let me down, but it doesn't know what to do. 
I tried to tell it a joke, sing a little song, even tried reminding it all the things it used to love. 
But my heart told me, "I just need some space." 
I told it that I could not do that; I needed my heart. 
My heart took a pause and looked back up to me and said, "I needed you too." 

© 2017 Erin Locke


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Erin Locke
Let me know what you think, it's a bit of a personal piece and I am really new to this website.

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Very well done! My brain and my heart are often at odds, so I can identify with this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Erin Locke

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! :)
Oh my goodness this poem is awesome. I love how you personify your heart and the ending line is so powerful.

Thanks for sharing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Erin Locke

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! 😊

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