Kissing Tony

12/12/07

Kissing Tony

Erin L George

 

Krazy, koo-koo goes my mind, as I spin on the taste of his tongue -

Intercoursed with the call of a chick-o-dee (minus Springtime dew and daffidols)

Someone, stop this madness! I’d be remiss to know the comings and goings -

So irrelevant to the krazy, koo-koo clucking that sprays my senses blind.

I close my eyes. Caramel! La! I bite at my tongue, frustrated that his is not

Near for more intercoursing. For a sword fight built on lust, drive

Greed. Swollen on koo-koo callings (I hear them now and close my ears).

Tony likes his nibbled on. I could purr to him in night dreams -

Or, stay awake, and f**k him with my mind. Undressing him; one by one

No! Two by two! (that’s better!) My scrambled mind runs blissful -

You’ve made me krazy koo-koo! “Kiss me, you fool!”

Reviews

[Lorraine]

What an intense piece of art. Its spontaneity comes naturally sinister and passionate, both at the same time. Reading this seems like taking a peak at a lovesick woman's mind. Nice poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[c.m.]

This is very different from what you usually read, but in a refreshing sort of way. This has an odd feel to it, but it's good writing. I enjoyed it.