Together

I look to see your beautiful eyes staring back

I laugh and a smile cracks

I am so glad to be with you

And I am sure you are too

 

You know you make me weak

Sometimes it's hard for me to speak

I truly completely believe

You have given your heart for me to receive

 

You know me so well

That in my thoughts you always dwell

It's hard for me to look away

Far from you, I never want to stay

 

I've entrusted my heart to you

And cannot wait to see what you will do

Will you tell me you love me

And together we will always be

 

Will you hold me in your arms

working your natural charm

Keeping me nice and warm

even in an ice cold storm

 

Will you laugh when I try to be funny

With your chuckle sweet as honey

And if I ever start to cry

Will you comfort me, or at least try

 

When you learn what we feel is real

Will you drop to the ground and kneel

Ask me to be your wife

Through happiness and strife

 

If I say yes with everything I live for

Will you give me just as much or even more

As I walk towards you adorned in white

Will you be thrilled with the sight

 

When I say “I do”

Will you say “me too”

When you first kiss my lips

Will it send a shiver even to your fingertips

 

As the years roll by and we grow old

Will it still be me you'll be wanting to hold

Will I still be your best friend

and promise that your feelings will never bend

 

You’re the one I love the most

So obviously about it, I'd want to boast

It's only natural, you'll find

for such thoughts to cross my mind

 

I'm sorry if I come on too strong

I've just had these feelings bottled up so long

I can't hold them back anymore

I want you to know for sure

I love you

It's true

I really do

Love you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love and desire. I like the way you ask questions and the kind emotions in the poem. Love can overtake us. Make us feel like we are in a dream world. It is a good place to be. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[TJ]

"Far from you, I never want to stay" try 'far from you I will not stay"
"So obviously about it, I'd want to boast" try "so about this love I'd boast"
Besides these couple syllable fixes this poem is great! I can obviously feel the love the narrator feels for the subject but I also since she is unsure about how he feels. Good Work!