paper

paper

A Poem by InsidiousRain

am I made of paper?
paper life
paper families
paper towns
paper cuts.
paper blood.
limp paper.
wet with paper blood.
 
one match
one strike
paper inferno
paper life
gone to ashes

© 2015 InsidiousRain


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I really really like this...great play on words, and the repetition works really well.

and I love your economy with words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ya know - sometimes I wonder of the questions such as this... We can define ourselves as we please because it is OUR perception of reality within which we dwell.

I think I understood what you were driving toward but do YOU feel you adequately defined it? I felt I understood your thought flow before I read it aloud - not because I did. A good form, but an expansion might be more compelling and powerful.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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InsidiousRain
InsidiousRain

NY



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Some people are sheep. Some are politicians. Some are wisemen, leaders. A black and white world. Me? I'm that queer kid. Whoever has the faintest idea where I'm going, it sure as hell isn't me. .. more..

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