I, II

I promised I would stay 

but what if I can't

what if I leave early

everyone leaves in the end

even the ones who promised they wouldn't

what's one more broken promise

 one less shadow

that withers away.

Reviews

[Chris]

How often do we word promises the wrong way? It isn't that we mean them any less it's just we seldom control the parameters of life as we live it.

A good taste of inevitable sorrows over unable to be kept ...moments.