White Rose

White Rose

A Poem by Erin_is_peace
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Have you ever wanted someone that you can't have? Well if you have then you know what I've expressed in this poem...

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In an empty stair well.
Listening to the noise above.
Remembering what it was like only a few days ago.
Seeing your face in my mind.
Long, dark hair floating down past your sholders.
Your golden eyes that shine brightly as your gaze meets mine.
Porcelen skin that looks as if it's unhumanly beautiful.
Soft, pink lips that show the joy your spirt has by what you say.
You're beautiful.
If only what I want could be possible.
To have you as my own.
My one and only flower.
The kind you can't buy.
That you keep in a glass casing because it's so persious.
A perfect white rose.
No imperfections.
So pure and fragial that you're scared to touch.
But worth taking the risk to do so.
And yet none of this is obtainable.
For yet you are not of my kind.
Even if you were you would not have me.
I am a sister to you.
Nothing more, nothing less.
Not a lover who can fully fofill your hopes and dreams.
Your wants and desires.
I am only a girl and you are a goddess.
To high for me to obtain.
And yet i still strive for you.
Keeping my feeling a secret from you.
Because if you knew you wold see me differentaly. 
So i stay here thinking of you.
Wishing all this could be true..  

© 2009 Erin_is_peace


Author's Note

Erin_is_peace
I know that there was some misspelling but hey what can you do. anyways let me know what you think! :)

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Again...Aunt Kim is proud of you...but I have to say...she is only a girl...and you are the goddess....don't discount yourself...no one is too high for you my sweet girl.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice flow! but I experience this every day!...except I am a guy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really strong and packed with emotion. very powerful metaphor of the perfect white rose. beautifully written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is a wonderful write here.
It's beuatiful. So well written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Erin_is_peace
Erin_is_peace

Monroe, NC



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Hey I'm erin! I'm 16 I live in nc. I've been writing for a few years, thought I would get some of my writing out there. This is my 2ed page.. I don't really remember the password to my other one haha... more..

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