Crucifixion's Universal Anecdote

Crucifixion's Universal Anecdote

 

 

egomaniacs run amok

up on the hill

the king plays

while the jesters weep

and the crown rusts

from lack of trust

and fears turned tears

 

 

erin--cilberto

5/26/25

Reviews

[Desert Knave]

It's seeming like the bottom is a long, long ways to go. Hard-hitting write here. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Reality is sinking in for millions here and world-wide; I can feel lots of buyer's remorse. The world is in turmoil indeed.
Baboons rule the jungle with their lion, bafoons rule here with their orange hair leader. He wants to do anything to take credit for it and make himself great. Masks are coming off.
You write with truth and conviction.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob.

[emmajoygreen]

Life can be what the spirit calls right or wrong! Madness doesn't care, reality rarely reaches the nth height, trial and error make for disaster.. But, wisdom learned in error can be the winner. Painful endurance scars but endures.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I appreciate you, em.
And the insightful thought you put into your reviews...you touch the poems and let them touch you.
j.

[emmajoygreen]

Yes, IS the latter: if something, someone touches me, rightly - even wrongly that's it.. might prove to be a negative but then, can learn by that only too often! Yet, the alternative can be precious, lasting.. what- or however the scar. Probably!