Misdemeanor

Misdemeanor 

 

 

 

I am not a capitalist

in fact,

my life is mostly

lower case

 

the kind you don't win in court

but get 90 days

60 with good behavior

and some decent poems.

 

erin-cilberto

3/13/2025

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Great metaphors
As usual your writing astounds me and inspires me and excitedly I try once more

[jacob erin-cilberto]

That is kind of you to say, Julie...means a lot that I might inspire another poet every so often.read moreThat is kind of you to say, Julie...means a lot that I might inspire another poet every so often.
j.

[Dhaye]

I can relate to this in way of writing...well, I find lowercase creative. Sometimes formality kills creativity. I do not feel guilty with the style because everyone has his own to show.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, they surely do...thank you for your words, Dhaye,
j.

[DecentlyOkayWriter]

my life is mostly
lower case
. . .
(I'm taking my favorite part and stashing it here. Hope you don't mind. Sometimes, lowercase is the perfect way to be.)

Oh, the criminality of a good poem. While it's the smallest misdemeanor, a good verse or two deserves life in prison. (Especially since I didn't think of it myself ;D)

Please, keep writing, although you seem to have no problem with that.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your very kind review, DOW,
j.

[redzone]

I had to smile at your 'misdemeanor', Jacob. I think though, the muse goddess has given you a life sentence, because while you are not a 'capitalist', your poetic verse is a high felony. may you continue to commit high crimes of metaphoric passion!!! Sorry Jacob, I think they lost the keys to your cell. Write On Brother, Write On!!! ;0)
-Curt

[jacob erin-cilberto]

If they lost the keys, I just hope the meals are good.
Thank you, Curt,
j.