Chimes

Chimes

 

 

on a surly afternoon

snobbish winds

chill the personality

of the day

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/4/25

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This little piece of brevity lets me travel. It is also very visual j. I heard wind chimes going nuts in a strong wind on a cold day and aggravating the neighbors. Bamboo chimes are quite hollow but the other sort can drive you insane if you want a quiet afternoon. Are they snobby? Well maybe they are, but I can see other possibilities in metaphor as well first this piece.

Chris

[Lorry]

I had windchimes once, or perhaps it was just tinnitus, or both, but I do like your description of snobbish winds. Very apt indeed.
Luckily the picturing today is calm and still, but if I concentrate I can still hear them clanging from days and weeks past.
It's enough to drive us doolally, so it's a comfort to know it's just a figment of my imagi-hearing!
😃

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that, "imagi-hearing!
Thanks, Lorry,
j.

[Stella Armour]

Hope those snobbish winds blow themselves out with their high and mighty attitude ..(altitude) .

Stella

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Me too.
thanks, Stella,
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh how I dislike those winter wind chilled day. Makes me shiver thinking about it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I know you are in corn country...when I lived up in lockport, 30 miles south of Chi-town....those lake winds were vicious in winter. Down here in Southern Illinois when people think it is cold, I laugh.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m more north. I live close to Peoria. It depends but we can get terrible winter winds. Last night it was cold and windy burr

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... the Winds lift me to a place of Grace where seeds of Reason fall in place. You write as though you are a Maestro conducting Orchestrated Violins and soft Kettle drums. Peace and harmony... gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Pat...
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Jacob... as we Navigate through Streams of rocks with white Terns reflecting and expecting the green Buds of whispering Willows. gently, Pat

[K. Louis]

no unnecessary words here. love it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, K.
j.