moment

moment

strangers kiss

under orange maples

then say goodbye

without exchanging names

erin-cilberto

1/15/25

Reviews

[Vol]

Jacob,
I've always loved a good mystery, it's one of my favorite genres... especially those that invite me to participate.
Vol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Vol,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I have pondered on this poem for a while. There is something really tantalizing about kissing a stranger in such a setting and not meeting again. I can’t help feeling there is a lot more here than meets the eye j.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, isn't there?
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ohhh....quite the suggestive scene. Kissing a stranger and then never seeing the stranger again brings titillating and provocative situations to mind. I liked this short gem. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Lydi...
j.