eventually

eventually

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


eventually

 

kin blood

finds its path

through veins of separation

until two connect enough

to allow coagulation

and then

celebration

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/10/25

© 2025 jacob erin-cilberto


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YES! When siblings don't speak with each other, they lose part of their history. It is cause for celebration when they find their way back to one another. Lovely sentiment here. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

and so deeply felt at this time...thank you, Lydi,
j.
as long as the coagulation isn't from a knife wound:/ but then again that wouldn't be cause for celebration LOL

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

true, thanks, brother bunny...
Wish this damn bleeding would stop!
Beautiful written from the soul. I hope u you ate surrounded by family at all the places in Where they are needed

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

thank you for your words, D.
j.
This song beautifully explores the theme of familial bonds and the journey towards connection and reconciliation. Its poetic and introspective nature is compelling, offering a deep emotional resonance. For more music analysis and insights, *Lever-Edge.net* is a great website to explore.

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Rudolf,
j.
So well said, this is wonderful

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

thank you, poetgurl
To paraphrase, what God has joined together, none can put asunder, if the willingness to rejoin is there.

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

yes, if it there, it will happen.
thank you, John,
j.
I hope this celebration was wild and outrageously wonderful Jacob. While it often takes longer than you would like, when the reunion happens GAZINGA!!!!
-Curt

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Curt,
j.
Beautiful. After a separation, a coming together of kin. That is well worth celebrating. Blood is thicker than water.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Yes, it is. Thank you, Chris,
j.
There are differences of opinion, but eventually there can be a blending of diplomacy where Prime Minister ChurchHill Smiles and all is Well. softly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Yes a blending of diplomacy....much needed.
thank you, Pat,
j.
How lovely this poem felt. Fabulous! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Lisa...Peaceful days ahead.
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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