eventually

eventually

 

kin blood

finds its path

through veins of separation

until two connect enough

to allow coagulation

and then

celebration

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/10/25

Reviews

[redzone]

I hope this celebration was wild and outrageously wonderful Jacob. While it often takes longer than you would like, when the reunion happens GAZINGA!!!!
-Curt

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful. After a separation, a coming together of kin. That is well worth celebrating. Blood is thicker than water.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, it is. Thank you, Chris,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

There are differences of opinion, but eventually there can be a blending of diplomacy where Prime Minister ChurchHill Smiles and all is Well. softly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes a blending of diplomacy....much needed.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[LisaCarol]

How lovely this poem felt. Fabulous! Thanks for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Lisa...Peaceful days ahead.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

Finding coagulation in kin’s blood isn’t always easy especially if there is a reason for the separation.

The reuniting can be a cause for celebration and joy.

This poem makes a profound statement of family coming together and finding way back.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And sometimes coagulation when there never was uniting in the first place.
thank you, P.B.....
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[MCS]

What a powerful read in so few words. I've missed out on the coagulation and therefore missed the celebration.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Mary,
j.

[Senu Jayasinghe]

Wow. So concise but powerful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Senu,
j.