punch line

punch line

 

 

bow-tie demeanor

rigid collar

voice in strict regiment

 

 

and then

laughter

like that of a jester

 

the miracle

of turning gravity 

to levity

 

when unwrapping

the gift 

of humor.

 

it loosens the top button

of uneasiness

with a few flamboyant words

 

and then the soldiers

fall out.

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/21/24

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The joker, the comedian. Your poem reminds me of Dave Allen, an Irish comedian, who would deliver his humour from a chair, always suited and booted often with a cigarette and a glass of whisky as company. His delivery was impeccable. The timing perfect. Could turn a serious subject into hilarity with ease. You nailed him for me in this poem j. Humour is such a gift. Love this piece.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you so much, Chris...and I am going to look him up now.