Belonging

Belonging

 

 

 

a little murmur

heart in transition

few beats short of a cry

 

i saw you yesterday

in the lake's reflection

the water's swirl

still could not extinguish

 

the flame

you became.

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/30/24

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

That little murmur takes us by surprise sometimes when a the past re-surfaces and stays for a while.
Pictures from an old photograph album we had almost forgotten about.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Stella,
j.

[Perdition]

Something about this time of year huh..lol. J. This one hits a pulse of maybe a touch of looking back and looking forward. Looking into something the eyes try never to see...more of a heart thing,..emotional struggles of being a being locked in time and space. I likes..Appreciate!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Perdition,
j.

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful lines. Very lovable poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Arundass,
j.