a punctuated note

a punctuated note

 

 

the sax was off key

your blues were my blues

your life, my life

music, that semi-colon

connecting our thoughts

as love became

a complex sentence

we were trying to finish.

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/18/24

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

your blues were my blues
your life my life

Such lovely words of love, with music running through it. The intentions were all good, even if it turned complex. Touching little write j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind wrods, Chris,
j.

[mabel mae]

what a sweet little poem! music truly does connect people's souls, sort of like an invisible string. -mabel

[Tumi]

Such sweets words of love, "the semicolon connecting our thought
i love the above expression