Senryu # 476

Senryu # 476

shoe scraped residue

a plague of insanity

walk into never

erin-cilberto

10/29/24

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Right Shoe escaped Plague ...
being a bit more Brilliant
Beat the Drums slowly...
softly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very slowly,
thank you, Pat,
j.

[Marie]

Lovely use of metaphor and alliteration in this meaningful Senryu, J... Love the image portrayed but wondering if "a plague of insanity" has anything to do with the results which the political scene in America could unfold shortly. Hoping not, yet I don't feel it refers to psychological instability? Hoping for a healthy outcome to the elections, otherwise it will be like drowning in a sea of insanity, sadly. Great thought provoking Senryu, dear J... Thank you for sharing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your understanding review, Marie,
j.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear J...

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's always advisable to watch where one steps. I enjoyed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, it is, thank you, Fabian,
j.

[Tumi]

The scraped shoes give a real sense of struggle. “Plague of insanity” hits hard, and that walk into never feels so creepy. Love it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, tumi,
j.

[Soren]

Oh Jacob another one to mess with my mind. I took this several ways. One about how we view and treat mental illness, Two the present election and politics. Other options I'm sure more will occur. A most fabulous senryu that was mind provoking and the first line a vivid image

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I'd say either choice works,
Thank you for giving this brief piece some thought, my friend,read moreI'd say either choice works,
Thank you for giving this brief piece some thought, my friend,
j.

[Writergurl]

Oh Wow! Very creative, I love this.
Very nicely written, love the style of the writing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review,
j.