Senryu # 476

Senryu # 476

shoe scraped residue

a plague of insanity

walk into never

erin-cilberto

10/29/24

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's always advisable to watch where one steps. I enjoyed.

[tumi]

The scraped shoes give a real sense of struggle. “Plague of insanity” hits hard, and that walk into never feels so creepy. Love it!

[Soren]

Oh Jacob another one to mess with my mind. I took this several ways. One about how we view and treat mental illness, Two the present election and politics. Other options I'm sure more will occur. A most fabulous senryu that was mind provoking and the first line a vivid image

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I'd say either choice works,
Thank you for giving this brief piece some thought, my friend,read moreI'd say either choice works,
Thank you for giving this brief piece some thought, my friend,
j.

[Writergurl]

Oh Wow! Very creative, I love this.
Very nicely written, love the style of the writing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review,
j.