Haiku # 875

Haiku # 875

 

 

the Black-eyed Susans

suspect winter is arriving

curl into themselves

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/29/24

Reviews

[Writergurl]

This is one amazing write, I love Haiku's but dislike winter.
Wonderful writing here

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Winter kills so many living things, including people.
Thank you, Writergurl.
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Lovely and seasonal. I could say more because I have to.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ken.
And I always like your "more."

[Desert Knave]

Love the perfectly used seasonal aspect of the haiku. Well done. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Can be a good indicator.
It is amazing how creatures and plants sense season's change.
Enjoyed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, it is, Sami...yes it is.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome sir Jacob

[Tumi]

Winter approaches, it time to get cold,
very good

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, tumi,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

The frost is resting ... where Sun was once on Pumpkins... Jack O Lanterns smile... as ever, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and they have great smiles, thank you, Pat,
j.

[emmajoygreen]

.. and so they do, self-protecting and shyly as many do when needing! Charming truth, jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love Black-eyed Susans....they remind me of Vermont.
thank you, em,
j.