the Math

the Math

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

the Math

 

the gravity of figures

of make-believe polls

of enemies within

of retribution

 

Satan smiles 

fire dancing in his eyes

has us right where he wants us

tiptoeing atop the flames

 

ready to ash ourselves

into a deep sleep

from which a nightmare

world will wake

 

and we will rest in an urn

of regret

wishing we had solved

the equation adding 

 

love and peace

as more than imaginary

numbers.

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/27/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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Is Gallup a "make believe" poll? I thought they were the gold standard. I remember when Trump won their Most Admired Man in America in 2020; beating out Barrack Obama who formerly held that honor. Donald hasn't changed at all since his interview on Oprah or his guest appearances on Fresh Prince of Bel Air and The Jeffersons...older but still the same Donald. I'm amazed how everyone is suddenly terrified of him, the familiar New Yorker we all watched on TV for years. It's laughable.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Weeks Ago

He is nothing new or surprising to me.
I know who he is.
j.
Fabian G. Franklin

2 Weeks Ago

Glad he won both the popular and electoral vote so there can be no doubt of America's choice.
what to do in a trump dictatorship?
starve! die not free!

NUMBERS BE DAMNED! WE HAVE CHOICE!

is this god's chosen one?
find a new god

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

yes, "die not free"!
I hear you...I have an uneasy feeling about Tuesday.
Hope you are.. read more
keith

2 Weeks Ago

it has been a long 10 years
of course the path i chose was difficult from the beginning
.. read more
This one puts me in mind of a certain politician. Especially the retribution part. Yes, a nightmare world is a possibility.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Could be , definitely could be.
dear Jacob... all the precious People and Children... all our Prayers ascending... become the Oasis of a Dream... We will weather the Storm... and Reform where possible. Amen... tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Pat,
j.
Patricia Wedel

3 Weeks Ago

Where there is Light... there is a Path... Amen Pat
Great. Amazing..
possibly timeless..
Timely, for sure.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you light,
j.
light and ashes

2 Weeks Ago

You are always welcome,
Jacob.
WOW! J. a strong comment on "Donald" and his spewing words that come from that fiery mouth...you hit every note so well, God forbid for all of us....we will burn in hell! A nightmare world...how scary is that?
this is the time to pray, even tho we may not be religious...
Warmly, B

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

appreciate your words, Betty,
j.
Betty Hermelee

3 Weeks Ago

I hope they weren’t too harsh J. But it’s so disturbing
Betty Hermelee

3 Weeks Ago

And you are very welcome🌷
Warmly B
Do the math; it is no brain-er. He did say he will use the national guard or the army if he has to for the enemies within.
He might need to rejuvenate Alcatraz to serve another purpose.
An excellent take on the current political situation facing the US.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for your kind words, Sami....it is all so scary.
j.
You know, call me old fashioned, but I reckon this might be about a rather imminent hot topic in today's good old U S of A!
But honestly, I have no idea Jacob who I'd going to be top of the charts next week, but I would bet it very might be Taylor Swift!
It goes without saying that smiling Satan is Marily Manson and could only be deemed as fake news if it turned out to be some other Trumpet!
At best, I'd put an each way bet on it being Sabrina Carpenter, but only because I read about her once and remembered her name!
I'm just glad this wasn't political, because I flunked politics.... just like Trump! 😃

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Marilyn Manson...ah ha!
Oh yes, not political one bit....mmmm
So much this.....I think the forces that be would be satisfied with the people fighting amongst themselves, Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Dave,
j.
There's no violence in politics if we're the victims.
A very poignant piece, thank you for sharing it.

-C


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, Everett,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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