secrets of dark angels

secrets of dark angels

 

 

 

 

morning is slicing

through the blinds

the eyes inside

are waking

visions complement

the sun

I close my mind

I just want to feel

my way along

 

a braille trail

to love.

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/22/24

Reviews

[Marie]

God be with the days, dear J... Miss them!!! Smiling, all we have now are the memories, but they are pure 24ct gold! So, much to be grateful for.
Love this poem, the title drew me in to read it as I absolutely love anything to do with the Angels! Fantabulous (fantastic+fabulous) imagery throughout the poem. Love so beautifully expressed! Thank you for sharing, dear J...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kindest of reviews,
j.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear J...

[redzone]

ah, those early morning delights of touch. Or as Sheldon would say, "shazinga"... don't mind my silliness, your poem made me giggle remembering a time when love rose with the morning sun. Thanks Jacob, for the smiles... shazinga
Curt

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Shazinga!!!!!!!
Thank you, Curt,
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

The ending is superb
Great write again
Nothing less would I expect from you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

You are too kind....thanks,
j.

[Tumi]

"Secrets of Dark Angels" shows a gentle journey toward love, with a wish to feel the way forward rather than see it. Very good

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, tumi,
j.

[Relic]

I suppose it's one of the first things a man thinks of when waking next to a warm female. Nature installed it in us. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

appreciate you, Relic,
j.