Elderly Dust

Elderly Dust

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Elderly Dust

 

 

 

counting cobwebs

in my attic of lucidity

a make-believe awareness

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/17/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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Loved this one too Jacob
You never fail to please

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

thank you, Julie,
j.
sounds like you've been daydreaming again Jacob. and down the rabbit hole we go!! beware of the mushrooms though, or you might get caught in those cobwebs... er.. I mean have a good... trip... wait, is this review a dream!! I see cobwebs all around me, ohno spiders everywhere!! er... ;0)

sorry Jacob, but, but Alice was 10 feet tall, honest!! I'm going to go take a nap now.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

did you meet Grace Slick there?
I've been counting those cobwebs for years Jacob. I always get distractleated when I get to double figures.
My make believe friend said they'd help me, but didn't show up snd haven't seen them since!
😃

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

can't trust those make-believe friends at all...
j.
Yes, dust accumulates, the step slows ...
and thankgod for Make-Believe! :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

Appreciate your look at this one, JD,
thank you,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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