Honk if you're dreaming

Honk if you're dreaming

delightful patterns

road signs on your precious skin

a freckle or two

hitchhiking 

their way into a lover's arms

traveling light and free

you and me.

erin-cilberto

10/19/24

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Hitchhiking with Freckles can be Romantic when the evening Sun shines a Rendezvous for two and Crickets tickle their Legs in three quarter Time. softly, Pat

[Desert Knave]

Following a trail of freckles and the like can get one a long way down the road. ~Jim

[mabel mae]

honk honk. pay attention to all that detail. I felt your smile through the poem. -mabel

[JD Major]

Honk, honk, it's a dream,
JD :)

[Red Brick Keshner]

Now that sort of intimate attention brings us out of anonymity into seeing and knowing over and beyond flings over the span of a night.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Red,
j.

[redzone]

It's a beautiful dream, isn't it Jacob!!
Okay, time to wake up and make that dream real!!! ;0)
Curt

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Curt,
j.