Honk if you're dreaming

Honk if you're dreaming

delightful patterns

road signs on your precious skin

a freckle or two

hitchhiking 

their way into a lover's arms

traveling light and free

you and me.

erin-cilberto

10/19/24

Reviews

[Vol]

Erin,
Amen! Who needs a GPS?
Vol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Imagine having a GPS to help follow the freckles?
that would be interesting.
j.

[Vol]

Erin,
The one I'm using has a King Arthur theme... I get to go on quests...
Vol

[andrew mitchell]

It's like joining the dots.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah yes......

[Patricia Wedel]

Hitchhiking with Freckles can be Romantic when the evening Sun shines a Rendezvous for two and Crickets tickle their Legs in three quarter Time. softly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, thanks, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

I love to think of Crickets on the 💜 Hearth as the Holidays will be Romantic this Year… with a bit of Humor… my Friend. softly, Pat

[Desert Knave]

Following a trail of freckles and the like can get one a long way down the road. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Certainly can, thank you, Jim,
j.

[mabel mae]

honk honk. pay attention to all that detail. I felt your smile through the poem. -mabel

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, mabel,
j.

[JD Major]

Honk, honk, it's a dream,
JD :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hope the car doesn't drive out of the dream and crash off the bed.
thank you, JD,
j.

[JD Major]

Haha, honk, honk, now it's a nightmare! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

all this honking makes me think I am back in NY again.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Now that sort of intimate attention brings us out of anonymity into seeing and knowing over and beyond flings over the span of a night.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Red,
j.

[redzone]

It's a beautiful dream, isn't it Jacob!!
Okay, time to wake up and make that dream real!!! ;0)
Curt

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Curt,
j.