the find

the find

they found human remains

in my heart

when they dug up

the words

conveying

what I once felt

for you.

erin-cilberto

9/1/24

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Good morning from Lisa, still in beautiful Spain...
Been ages since I read and reviewed anyones poems...
I had quite a year with falls and a new knee and so just did not feel like it...Plus, no writing of my own...
Well, I am back and so happy to be here.
I have posted a few new poems so that too feels great.
Your poem is how I feel. Our hearts are full of the memories of love and so they will stay with us forever... even after death.
All my very best to you dear Jacob... I plan on going back through your poems and reviewing..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am so glad you are back, Lisa...and I hope your new knee works...I am recovering from foot surgery...
j.

[Lisasview]

Surgery is such a pain... literally... Had issues with scar tissue and went back in last week for manipulation... now 5 days a week in PT...
Hope you will have time to take a look at my newest work.
Hope your foot surgery goes well....
Lisa

[Desert Knave]

Wow. A strong write with feelings I imagine many can identify with.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Jim,
j.

[Soren]

Another clever right Jacob. It is nice to know that there were human feelings in that heart, But then, of course, we always knew there were given the poems here that you write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Soren,
j.

[Arundass TP]

The starting of poem looks something more metaphorically blended. Great poem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Arundass,
j.