sliding into the figurative

sliding into the figurative

 

Whitman's poetry

leaves grass stains

on the knees of my mind

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/30/24

Reviews

[Soren]

What a marvelous twist of words to give meaning to a thought. Whitman one of my favorite poets this holds a special meaning. The question is what type of grass was on Whitman's mind? (or rather the knees of his mind) A most fun read Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Soren...yes, what type?

[Vol]

Jacob.
Hahahaha! How delightfully appropriate!
Vol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Vol,
j.

[Marie]

An exquisitely penned emblematic write, succinct and to the point. You paint an excellent picture through your choice of words for your reader! Great write, J... Thank you for sharing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Marie,
j.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, J...

[Neville]

What a character and such remarkable free flowing versatility .. I'm referring to Walt Jacob .. well Walt Whitman actually .. but then you knew that already don't ya .. and if I am write, then you better go check on the seat of your pants too before you get home or no doubt you'll be for it .. This is really cool, and I do mean, really really cool .. Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Neville,
j.

[Thomas W Case]

Superb...love the symbolic nature and wordplay.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Thomas,
j.

[apennylate]

leaving the sentiment

Bukowski's poetry
leaves me in
a whiskey birdcage

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like this...thanks....
j.