the latest Noah replica

the latest Noah replica

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

the latest Noah replica

 

the vast majority

of heaven gazers

see visions of the promise land

 

but this god is not their Moses

there is no Canaan left

the map was lost when the river parted

 

now they will all drown in belief

the lifeguards were false prophets

and the Ark a mirage in a sea

 

of deception.

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/2/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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I agree! Lots of fake histories, narratives and religious claims, attributed to God, Gods.
We need to sift through those and quit blaming God for this and that; claiming God sanctioned evil events done by evil tribes and people.


Posted 4 Months Ago


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jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your insights and visit to this piece, Sami,
and I agree with what you said.read more
Sami Khalil

4 Months Ago

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome sir Jacob

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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