Brain Freeze Dream

 

Brain Freeze Dream

 

 

like a sadistic milkshake

you stroll away with that flavorful sway

and my ice cream heart melts into the scoop

of your luscious cone crease

where butter pecan eyes meet

vanilla thighs

in ardent flip

from your lashes to your hips

i am double dipping

and my thoughts are dripping

causing a giggle in your mood

as if

you like being finger food

for my childish whims

and i like drinking you in

as you depart

spilling your wares over the rim

of my anticipation

 

which gulps your aura

with ardent tongue

till i wake up

 

with sticky memories

i can't seem to lick out of my mind.

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/8/11

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

That was quite a brain freeze mix with senses. Came out smooth and ended with sticky lines unable to erase out of my mind :) Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Appreciate your review,
j.

[Abhilash Hegde]

welcome jacob :)

[Chris Shaw]

Now that is what I call a sensual dream, and deliciously so. Love the title. Brain freeze. Quite a painful experience.

Like a sadistic milkshake. Yeah they can be when you get brain freeze. The art is not to be greedy, sip slowly lol.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Chris,
j.

[keith]

what a nastyfuk you are!
CONGRATS JACOB!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thanks, keith,
j.

[Arundass TP]

You are really master in writing poem. Excellent lines. Loved this piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I thank you for your kind words, Arundass,
j.

[apennylate]

"I am double dipping"
You may have doubly tripped over a few things in the dark on this one, and I was falling into the icky inky ick along with you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, thanks penny late.
j.

[Mariej]

Wow! What a sensual delight you have inked in this poem, J. The visual detail is soooo sensual! A truly unforgettable dream to enjoy! You express your delight superbly! Wonderful fun write which I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing, J... Continued sweet dreams too!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Marie,
j.

[Mariej]

Most welcome always, J...

[Samuel Dickens]

Now this is different. Chocolate is the most usual stand in for sex, but you've cleverly given it the boot with these frozen scoops. I normally don't like sticky fingers, but you've made it sound like fun.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Samuel,
j.