Senryu #343
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
Senryu #343
expressing candor
the unimportant vanish
liars reach heaven
erin-cilberto
7/20/24
© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
This senryu has a political feel to me j. Plenty of politicians are liars. They soon get found out. A short lived heaven hopefully.
Chris
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Chris...yes, they are.
j.
Excellent elegant truths depicted here. If some are uncomfortable.
Posted 1 Month Ago
Excellent elegant truths depicted here. If some are uncomfortable.
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Ken,
Yes, many are uncomfortable.
j.
Indeed this goes deeper than the varnish it is raw wood. Liars do reach heaven but only briefly and if they are good liars. So well said my friend.
Posted 1 Month Ago
Indeed this goes deeper than the varnish it is raw wood. Liars do reach heaven but only briefly and if they are good liars. So well said my friend.
1 Month Ago
Thank you for your kind words, Soren,
j.
The sad thing is that people tend to believe lies and reject the truth. I can never figure it out, J...
Thank you for sharing. Super Senryu expressing the truth...
Posted 1 Month Ago
The sad thing is that people tend to believe lies and reject the truth. I can never figure it out, J...
Thank you for sharing. Super Senryu expressing the truth...
1 Month Ago
I can't either, Marie,
j.
1 Month Ago
😀 Thank you, J...
Oh yeah. It's a liars'' heaven. Everytime. Well scribed.
Posted 1 Month Ago
Oh yeah. It's a liars'' heaven. Everytime. Well scribed.
1 Month Ago
Thank you, Rania,
j.
Reads like a politician’s promise. Only skin deep.
Posted 1 Month Ago
Reads like a politician’s promise. Only skin deep.
1 Month Ago
and thin skin at that,
thank you, andrew,
j.
“Amazing Grace… how sweet the sound…”
to be touched by an Angel”s Wing … “the truth will set you Free”… Amen… Pat
Posted 1 Month Ago
“Amazing Grace… how sweet the sound…”
to be touched by an Angel”s Wing … “the truth will set you Free”… Amen… Pat
1 Month Ago
and we need more freedom, more truth.
thanks, Pat,
j.
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jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
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