Senryu #343

Senryu #343

expressing candor

the unimportant vanish

liars reach heaven

erin-cilberto

7/20/24

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This senryu has a political feel to me j. Plenty of politicians are liars. They soon get found out. A short lived heaven hopefully.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...yes, they are.
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent elegant truths depicted here. If some are uncomfortable.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ken,
Yes, many are uncomfortable.
j.

[Soren]

Indeed this goes deeper than the varnish it is raw wood. Liars do reach heaven but only briefly and if they are good liars. So well said my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Soren,
j.

[Mariej]

The sad thing is that people tend to believe lies and reject the truth. I can never figure it out, J...
Thank you for sharing. Super Senryu expressing the truth...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I can't either, Marie,
j.

[Mariej]

😀 Thank you, J...

[Rania M]

Oh yeah. It's a liars'' heaven. Everytime. Well scribed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Rania,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Reads like a politician’s promise. Only skin deep.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and thin skin at that,
thank you, andrew,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

“Amazing Grace… how sweet the sound…”
to be touched by an Angel”s Wing … “the truth will set you Free”… Amen… Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and we need more freedom, more truth.
thanks, Pat,
j.