Senryu #344

Senryu # 344

 

 

Boardwalk blues child

born of friends with benefits

she glistens pure gold

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/20/24

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

All that glitters, my friend...nicely wrought. F.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fabian,
j.

[Mariej]

Babies are conceived in all kinds of places and sadly, some enter the world not from a loving reunion, but each beautiful soul wrapped in the flesh of a human body is angelic and pure and a precious gift to the world, dear Jacob. Thank you for sharing this very thought provoking write!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Marie,
j.

[Mariej]

Most welcome always, dear J...

[Soren]

I suppose that many friends with benefits take that walk on the boardwalk or bored walk. Children are always golden whether planed or not and whether from a marriage or not. Another write that gives pause for thought

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Soren,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

The most beautiful Souls were conceived under the Boardwalk 🎶 in a Dream… Drummers hear Thunder… and Laughter.. splashing against the Shore of Ships against the Wind… Mermaids 🧜‍♀️ Rock your ♥️ Heart… Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your response is more poetic than the Senryu...
thanks, Pat,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

You are too kind… love to gather sea shells and Pearls of Wisdom… Hope you are healing and 😴 resting as the weather composes Music 🎶 and Mermaids 🧜‍♀️ sing you to a peaceful reassurance. softly. Pat