Senryu # 341

Senryu #341

signature trespass

integration of attack

the beast howls vainly

erin-cilberto

7/19/24

Reviews

[Tania Mo]

Ooooh the beasts. They get so mad when kicked.love it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Tania,
j.

[nadia dmitri]

This could be about so many things, all of them so interesting. Amazing and thought provoking work as always :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, nadia,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Perhaps this is another attack by the Russians on Ukraine!!! Well done J...
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

or an attacking speech that was supposed to profess unity...oh, it isn't in some people.
Thank you Betty...I like your interpretation...fits as well.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Always a pleasure j🌷
Warmly
B

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes! That is excellent…. Did you watch Bill Maher?…
Warmly, B🌷

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Didn't see him...

[Mariej]

A cryptic Senryu in this finely penned poem, Jacob. I am unable to decipher it! Thank you for sharing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Both senryu heavily influenced from what I saw and heard last night at the convention...
j.

[Mariej]

Thank you for solving the mystery for me, J. Now I understand! Thank you so very much...

[Einstein Noodle]

sounds Machiavellian gone awry .. the beast seems to have been castrated or something ..
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wish....he would be.
Thank you, E.
j.