Senryu #342

Senryu # 342

avalanche of lies

soverign king trips on own words

tongue turns truant child

erin-cilberto

7/19/24

Reviews

[Jaffer]

Ah but yes! Sovereign king always lies. Very true sir. It responsible for our poor state today. Please pray for Syrians.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Amen...and yes, on the prayers.
j.

[nadia dmitri]

Kings have always been a simultaneously enchanting and disheartening sight, great subjects for poetry and highlight disparities and hypocrisy. Great words and great work :))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your insightful words, nadia,
j.

[Mariej]

Love how you describe lies as an avalanche, Jacob! Brilliant us of the word. Politically related I feel. Lovely use of alliteration in the third line. Cryptic! Well penned and expressed. Lovely work, Jacob. Thank you for sharing...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, true..Thank you, Marie.
j.

[Mariej]

Most welcome always, J...

[Einstein Noodle]

hard to trust anything these days .. trouble is that mistrust stirred up and division weakens the stronghold from within ... :(
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

division is so prevalent now.
thank you, E.
j.