revision's vision's vacated

revision's vision's vacated

 

 

rogue-writer writes, wrangles

wrests words wily

willingly wastes no time

traveling back over and over

to those same wily wrested words

 

once owned for the few seconds

of second looks longingly laid

to rest wrested words wrangled

willingly

will once written remain

untouched rogues like

the vagabond poet who posted them.

 

erin-cilberto

5/19/24

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous alliteration and capturing the wild spirit. Well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words, Thomas,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob.. have you ever read the Poem “Vagabond House? It is unforgettable.. as are You. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

No, but will have to look for it.
thank you, Pat,
j.

[DIVYA]

Loved this wordplay and alliteration dear Jacob!
Words are wily, wrested, wrangled and so much more!

untouched rogues like
the vagabond poet who posted them.

These untouched rogues can be such amazing fun!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Divya,
j.