a deep gap between the in-between

a deep gap between the in-between

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

a deep gap between the in-between

 

 

 

spastic mountains

clouded intellect

the mist rises

as thoughts collect

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/6/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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Wow! Excellent imagery and poem.
Sure enough earthquakes can cause deep chasms.
Did you all feel the latest one???

Posted 7 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Months Ago

Back East they sure did. I am in the midwest now, so didn't feel that latest one.
My cousin i.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

Wow! You are welcome sir Jacob.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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