Disclamer

Disclamer

please ignore the spilling errers

in this pome.

just read it for continent

I had a dictionery once

but it got ruined in my flood

of thoughts

poetery is about feelings

not tecknikal stuff

mispellings our part of life

poetrey is life

and I right what I fill

nothing more.

erin-cilberto

3/15/24

Reviews

[JD Major]

So funny, Jacob! This delivers on multi levels!
JD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks JD....
j.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Jacob,

Clever, witty, humorous, and ingenious all in one well spit parkage ...

Moive

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Marve,
j.

[light and ashes]

This reads like the writer is trying their best to write in the middle of some kind of episode.
I kinda like that.
I like the use of "fill" instead of feel..at the end. Feels more true to the soul. Like you are "filling" with your feelings.
I like that.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, light,
j.

[light and ashes]

:) .......

[mou]

I come across this kind of beauty for the first time...
'...but it got ruined in my flood
of thoughts...'
Wow. Lovely!!
-mou.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thanks, mou,
j.

[Desert Knave]

I have done "pomes" like this in the past for effect ... but my favorite part is how readily the mind reads through the errors and gets the meaning with or without technical perfection. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim...
j.

[Thomas W Case]

Brilliant work. I love it.

[Nima.Hope]

Interesting. Ahmad Shamlou, an Iranian poet, once wrote a poem like yours.
I hope you're alright and life is treating you well.
Nima

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Life is good, it is just good to still be around...lucky.
thank you, NIma,
j..

[Nima.Hope]

Your welcome, Jacob:)

[Amanda Reynolds]

I am a 51 year old dyslexic English teacher and I applaud you for this poem. My students sometimes ask me while I struggle to spell something on the document camera why I teach English If I suck at spelling. I tell them because I LOVE literature. Your poem encapsulates this. Your lines, "I had a dictionery once but it got ruined in my flood of thoughts" are so beautiful! With your permission, I would love to share your poem with my students to illustrate the point that I want to hears their thoughts when they write even if it isn't perfect as I am receiving so much writing from A.I. instead of them. Thank you for your poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This means a lot, Amanda...your response touches me and yes, of course, share this with your students if you would like.
j.

[Andrew John]

Poetery is life; misss-pellings are rife. I like this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Andrew...and thank you for your wonderful readings of "the path" and "away"-

[Chris Shaw]

I’m old school. Spelling is important. A message here for all who think it doesn’t count. Conveyed with both humour and creativity. Well done j. A little gem coming from a teacher.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Chris...
j.