Even if there is no land to look for, the raft remains afloat, steady, as it has been for an indefinite time, undisturbed and unbending. That's the image I pictured mentally. Thank you for sharing your work, author Jacob Erin-Cilberto. I wish you a nice day.
I like it. I love to just "float" along letting any and all prompts kick me into poetic gear. ~Jim
Posted 10 Months Ago
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10 Months Ago
Thank you, Jim...the current is absent for me right now...but reading here always inspires.
j.. read moreThank you, Jim...the current is absent for me right now...but reading here always inspires.
j.
Drifting with inner thoughts imagining you are afloat on water is a nice way to relax. Water and quiet can be so calming for a mind that is too busy. Lovely brevity. We all need to find that quiet, peaceful place.
dear Jacob... afloat on the Waves where we reminisce about the Courage
that it took to cross the Channels that changed our Dreams... still waiting to come True. gently, Pat
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
absolutely, Pat.
thank you so much for your words,
j.
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..