Senryu # 700

Senryu # 700

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Senryu # 700

 

 

 

in quiet confines

I drift with my inner thoughts

as a raft afloat

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/12/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Even if there is no land to look for, the raft remains afloat, steady, as it has been for an indefinite time, undisturbed and unbending. That's the image I pictured mentally. Thank you for sharing your work, author Jacob Erin-Cilberto. I wish you a nice day.

Posted 1 Year Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kind words, Stu,
j.
I like it. I love to just "float" along letting any and all prompts kick me into poetic gear. ~Jim

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Jim...the current is absent for me right now...but reading here always inspires.
j.. read more
being adrift is such a peaceful state of being.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Cherrie,
j.
Pure peace in words. That is what I got.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

yes, peace....and thank you, Ken.
j.
A meaningful in-depth poem. Loved it 😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you, my friend.
j.
Drifting with inner thoughts imagining you are afloat on water is a nice way to relax. Water and quiet can be so calming for a mind that is too busy. Lovely brevity. We all need to find that quiet, peaceful place.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words, Chris,
j.
dear Jacob... afloat on the Waves where we reminisce about the Courage
that it took to cross the Channels that changed our Dreams... still waiting to come True. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

absolutely, Pat.
thank you so much for your words,
j.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

154 Views
7 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 22, 2024
Last Updated on January 22, 2024

Author

jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



About
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..